I have the Pass, I've listened to it about 1 1/2 times. I liked it. The Farlow has to be interesting, I'll get it some day. Same goes for the Smith. Sorry if I'm not much help.
My only real complaint is that the tunes are too dam short.
Without reading the above comments - I'll get to them later - I wouldn't mind studying that transcription. It fits right in the pile with my other sight reading/analysis.
Please don't throw rocks.
I'm downloading it now and I'll listen to it later.
Since I haven't heard it I'll just say that if Pat's gonna use a synth, he might want to move on to a second synth patch. It's been - what...25 years since Offramp?