Always something new to learn.
Rereading the thing last night, I also saw one or ten examples of sloppy sentence structure. In a sense I don't really care, because I make no claim of being a "real" writer whatsoever, but otoh, it does have my name on it, so the old self-respect bugaboo rears its head, if only by instinct.
My editor came out to my gig last night. Maybe I should have clocked him?