As someone who makes a living both reading and writing, I'll add that writing - creative or otherwise - is often a balance between artistry and clarity. Rules are rules, but they can (and often should) be broken. Now I love the way Clem strings his words/thoughts together - very creative, dude! - but clarity is not exactly his thing (in my humble, narrow-minded opinion at least). A mainstream music review (again, imho) should arguably err on the side of clarity, but that said I don't generally give a fuck about the technicalities of proper punctuation unless it makes reading the piece harder than it has to be.